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At first glance in my cursory sweep of the LDStorymakers Conference
bookstore, this title caught my eye. Then I saw the sign that said it
was written by a 15 year old, while my interest peaked, all my cynical
hackles did, too. I liked Christopher Paolini's Eragon, I really did - but it was
entirely obvious that it was written by a teenager: gimmicks in place
of emotion, long stretches of relying on travel for action, and a
certain amount of predictability.
Bone Warriors is SO MUCH BETTER! Bron
Bahlmann is a fabulous writer! I kept expecting to find things that
showed his age through his writing, and there were a couple of times I
thought I found it - only to be proven wrong.
Derrick and Tweaks are best friends, and when their families are
kidnapped by the evil Necromancer, they go to rescue them and save the
day. But its not that easy for a couple of kids on a quest. Along the
way, they end up with an enemy officer as a prisoner, a giant cow that
saves their lives, and menagerie of unique creatures to face and outwit,
each more menacing than the last.
Bone Warriors is a fantastic adventure - with two main characters that
are real, believable, loveable boys. There are so many twists and
turns, mixed with so many unique characters, there is no
predictability - right to the very end, you aren't sure what's going
to happen. The beginning is fabulous, the middle is tight, and the
ending is somewhere between "happily ever after" and
"cliffhanger", but I'm not sure which one is closer. You
will want a hankie toward the end, but I'm not telling you why, just
trust me.
It's
so good, that the only tiny speck I can find to critique about it is
the use of the word "lycan". Lycan is one of those words
like "orc" - it was created by one story(Underworld, Orc is
from Tolkien), and is quickly making its way into common usage. That's
it. That's my one nitpick. Believe me, I
looked for more, but that was all I found.
I completely enjoyed the book. I wholeheartedly recommend it to anyone
who likes an adventure, and I will be keeping my eye out for more by
this fabulous new author!
Well done, Mr. Bahlmann!
Well done, indeed!
Bone Warriors
Bron Bahlmann
ISBN:978-1-59955-322-1
Available for pre-order on Amazon.
www.bronbahlmann.com
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Jewel Punzalan Allen -
Pink Think: "And when you're
fifteen feeling like there's nothing to figure out, well count to ten,
take it in, this is life before you know what you're gonna be,
fifteen." - Taylor Swift in her song Fifteen
A
shout out for Bron Bahlmann (gotta love that name), the son of my
mentor-friend and author Shirley
Bahlmann. His debut fantasy novel Bone Warriors recently hit
bookstore shelves.
Bron is only fifteen, folks!
If this gives you visions of Chris Paolini, Weston at Wendword says Bron's
work is better. James Dashner has this
to say. Click here
for another review from Ali at Girl in a Whirl. Tristi of Tristi's Takes
also reviews Bone Warriors here.
Bron's blog says:
From the time he wrote "Grave Digger" in third grade, Bron
Bahlmann's mom pestered him to write more. At fifteen, he finally finished
the 80,000 word "Bone Warriors" which kept her busy editing
until it was published in May of 2009.
Did I say he was fifteen?
As good as the reviews he's getting, I can only imagine how much more
success he will have in the coming years. More power to you, Bron!
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When I was fifteen, I had lots of first chapters of novels crammed into
the top drawer of my study desk, but the idea or skill of of actually
writing a novel from start to finish wasn't remotely in my radar.
What I thought I really wanted to be was a rich corporate lawyer who would
later own a French villa then discover my parents switched me at birth and
I was actually a princess.
Fifteen is a memorable age.
The female protagonist of my historical novel Girl From Gurian is
fifteen. And so is New York Times #1 bestselling author Aprilynne Pike's
main character Laurel.
(I just had to get in that little blurb about Aprilynne's novel Wings
climbing to number one. I just read that amazing news here.
Congratulations Aprilynne!)
My fifteenth summer, I graduated from high school (we didn't have 11th and
12th grade in my Philippine high school) and went with some girls to my
best friend's province in northern Philippines. My memories of that trip
to this small, coastal fishing town would later inspire my paranormal
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J.
SCOTT SAVAGE, author of the "Farworld"
series says:
I had the chance recently to read Bone Warriors, a fantasy debut
by Bron Bahlmann an author and friend I met for the first time several
years ago.
I have to admit that when I agreed to read Bone
Warriors, I did it for two reasons. One was that his mother, Shirley
Bahlmann, is a good friend and wonderful author. The second reason was
that I wanted to see what a fifteen-year-old could pull off. Let me
clarify, this is not an author who started writing the story when he was
fifteen, this is an author who is fifteen, right now, with his first
published book in hand. He started writing the story when he was eleven.
Do you remember what your writing was like when you were eleven? Was it
even remotely publishable? Mine was not. So I went into the story with
both curiosity and trepidation. What I found was writing like this:
Two
huge figures lumbered out from a copse of dark trees. Each walked into
the meadow on two thin legs beneath bodies that were twice as tall as a
man and three times as broad. The bone men appeared to be scarlet
lacework gone horribly wrong, with wide spaces between woven sections.
Wobbling skulls sat on top of the bone skeletons and turned with quick
jerks to find bodies to stack in their giant arms like sodden firewood.
Only when the sun buried itself beneath the horizon did the monstrous
bodies gleam sickly white in the moonlight. The bone golems’ jerky
movements came from a random attachment of bones. Never stopping, they
used their strangely fitted joints to silently carry out the grisly task
until not a single body was left in the trampled meadow. Then the golems
deserted the bloody battlefield, disappearing beneath the dark trees
with their grisly burdens.
Cool stuff, huh? I finished Bone Warriors
in a day, and really enjoyed it. It’s an exciting read that fantasy
lovers young and old will enjoy. It is creepy enough to raise shivers
and exciting enough to keep you reading late into the night. I
completely enjoyed the characters and have passed it on to my sons to
read.
It’s not perfect. There are mistakes. But
they are very small things like word usage or things that an editor
should catch—many long paragraphs that should be broken, starting too
many paragraphs in a row with the name of the protagonist (Derik did
this, Derik did that), using the same word too close together, etc.
But the story itself is outstanding enough that
you quickly stop noticing any errors. Great characters, lots of action,
plenty of intrigue. The ultimate compliment an author can receive is
that the reader forgets who the author is and gets lost in the story.
This was absolutely the case here. Bron writes a great tale, that I thoroughly
enjoyed reading and I suspect there are many more to come from him. So I
asked him if we could do a little Q&A. Here are his answers.
1)
How old are you really? (May 2009) You know you can’t be fifteen and publishing
your first book, because that’s just not fair. So fess up.
Okay, you
all caught on, so I'll confess, I'm actually 15 1/2 years old. Sorry for
misleading you.
2) Give us the background on how this book came to be.
The book
came to be when I mixed one dream with 3 years of hard work and a
coating of imagination. (I had the dream when I was 11, and finished the
book at 14.)
I've always
loved fantasy because it lets me make the story any way I want and lets
me share my dreams with others.
4) Exact moment you found out your book had been accepted. How?
Reaction? Celebration?
It was
honestly one of the happiest moments in my life. My grandma and two
aunts and several cousins brought over pizza and a cake that read,
"Congratulations!" and we had a surprise party. I felt excited
and relieved. (When the books came out, I gave them each one for free. I
mean, it was worth it for pizza and cake!) I also felt a new urge and
power to finish the rest of my books.
5) How have your friends at school reacted to you being a published
author?
There have
been a lot of different reactions. Most people start with a disbelieving
reaction. "Really?" and "You're kidding!" are among
the most popular. After they realize it's true, they move on to a type
of greed mixed with envy and excitement. It's then that they ask how
much money I make. They are lowered back down to disbelief when I tell
them I only make about 45 cents per book. My best friends are very
supportive, though.
6) Do you find beautiful women, other than your mom, following you
around asking for an autograph or phone number?
Only a
couple so far, but I'm actually hoping the number of girls stays
minimal. (I don't like the smell of ammonia, which is what it takes to
bring them around.)
Next is to
work as hard as I can plus a little more to finish my next book and
still keep my grades up!
Thanks, Bron!
Can't wait to read the next one.
It is available
in many bookstores and on-line from Amazon
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Title: Bone
Warriors
Author: Bron
Bahlmann
Publisher: Sweetwater Book
Release Date: May 15, 2009
ISBN: 978-1599553221
Size: 278 pages, 6x9, softcover
Genre: YA Fantasy
Target Reader: Teens
Rating: 
Synopsis
Craving power and lusting for human souls, the wicked necromancer
sweeps the land, leaving behind nothing but death and devastation.
Returning home, fifteen-year-old Derrik and his friend Tweaks find
their homes burning and families missing. They immediately embark on
a rescue quest for redemption and retaliation. Such evil cannot be
allowed to roam exempt.
Sinister Giants, colossal green jungle cats, and undead monsters
confront them as Derrik and Tweaks encounter inconceivable threats
in the forbidden woods, as well as gain unlikely allies. The boys
soon realize that their only hope to save their families comes from
the very creature they cannot trust. But they re running out of
time. How can they put an end to the necromancer's terrifying reign?
Review
Remember when Eragon came
out? And everyone was raving over what a wonderful book it was and
that a 15-year-old was capable of writing such a great story?
Personally, I didn't like it. I didn't think it was a wonderful
book. The writing was weak. Good for a 15-year-old, perhaps, but not
good enough to stand against other books in the genre.
Now, I'm hearing the same things about Bone
Warriors. But guess what? This one really is good.
Derrik and Tweaks, the two main characters, were well developed. I
loved Tweaks (almost cried at the end). I wasn't quite as fond of
Derrik, but that's probably because he behaved more like a typical
15-year-old boy. They gain a couple of traveling companions on their
journey to save their family. I liked Ssaska; I wish Clatterin had
been a little better developed.
I was amazed at the unique characterizations of the various groups
of "people" Derrik and Tweaks encountered—the giants,
the boars, the bird people, the alligator pirate, and more. Bahlmann
gave them very distinct voices and personalities. I also thought the
various fauna and flora in this world were ingenious and very
clever.
The storyline was complex and kept me interested. However, as a
hero's journey, I felt I needed to see a little more change and
growth in Derrik's character. I also thought we needed a little more
foreshadowing of the eventual demise of the necromancer and his bone
warriors.
My biggest complaint about this book is the overuse of adjectives.
It was sometimes too distracting. I'd recommend that on his next
book, Bahlmann pull out half of them. And I do hope there is a next
book. Bahlmann's book was good, regardless of his age.
I recommend this book to teens who enjoy fantasy. Many adults will
enjoy it, as well.
I give Bone Warriors 4 stars.
Erin chimes
in: Overall, I liked this book but felt it needed a little
tighter edit. (Quit with all those adjectives, already!) I hovered
between 3 1/2 and 4 stars. I think that as his writing matures,
we'll see some great things from Bron Bahlmann in the future.
Content
Ratings
Language: 
Violence:
The necromancer is evil. His army slaughters people in real time,
but it's not gorey. The main characters fight various
"people" and get hurt. Some of the good guys die.
Drugs/Alcohol:
The alligator pirate drinks something that is similar to ale. (BRON
SAYS: IT IS NOT AN ALCOHOLIC DRINK!)
Immorality: 
Values/Themes:
Good wins; evil loses. Selfless acts save the day.
Age appropriate:
Pre-teens, teens and adults.
Writing Mechanics:
A few typos; adjectives run amok. Other than that, pretty good.
http://ldsfictionreview.blogspot.com/2009/05/bone-warriors-by-bron-bahlmann.html
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Reviewed
by Karen Hamilton and children on AML
Best friends
can be as different as
night and day. Derrik is the son of the blacksmith;
he is also much taller and muscular than his friend Tweaks. Tweaks is
the short-sighted- always-busy inventor of the village. Looking at the
two of them one might not expect such a tight friendship; however it
is a strong and unfailing one.
One morning
Derrik's father tells them why the woods are dangerous and why they
are always to stay out of them. "Those who built the village a
hundred fifty years ago floated downriver in boats, studying the
shadowed depths between the forest tree trunks with worried eyes for
any sign of wild animals. If that was all that ever lived there, they
should have been glad. They cleared trees, built homes, fenced fields,
and when they went into the woods after wandering livestock, they
discovered sink grass... a place that looks firm and fine until a body
steps on it, then they sink and drown, quick as you can
whistle. My granda told me of times he went in the woods with his da
for good hunting, fat birds and four-legged beasts a-plenty, and no
troubles besides sink grass. But something strange happened about a
hundred years ago. An able-minded villager, gone so long he was feared
dead, came out addle-headed, claiming to have seen horrible creatures deep
in the forest. Other villagers never came out. Strange cries
rang through the trees at odd hours. Travelers were turned around,
walking and walking without getting where they thought they were
going. A few survived, some walked themselves to death or landed in
the sink grass, which amounts to the same thing. So no one ventures
into those wild woods alone anymore. Especially my son." (p..9)
Tweaks takes
Derrik to see his new invention. It is a bit out of the village, to
help prevent a repeat of a previous invention gone bad. While
explaining it to Derrik, the boys see something fly over toward the
village and soon there is smoke coming from the direction of home.
Both boys take off and come upon a nightmare.
The village has
been destroyed and people that they have known all their lives are
missing, including their families. Derrik decides to go after his
family but Tweaks is hesitant. As that first night comes Derrik is at
home collecting anything that might be useful on his journey. As he
works he takes a moment and looks and sees the house as his mother
would. He stays to clean as much as he can before leaving in the
morning. Tweaks catches up with Derrik after he is already in the
forest and the boys set out to save their families and to take what
adventure they stumble on.
Along the way
the boys are helped by the least likely individuals and creatures.
Derrik and Tweaks reach deep inside themselves to face a
host of nightmares as they come closer to their families. Once they
arrive at the location where they are being held, the worst nightmare
is
waiting for them.
My children
devoured the book in two days and mom got the left-overs. This is a
book that is easy to read and the storyline is easy to follow.
The vocabulary is simpler than many other fiction books for children
but the author's vivid writing style reaches out and grabs the reader.
Bron Bahlmann, the author, began writing this book at the age of
eleven and had it published when he was fourteen. It will be
interesting to see what he will come out with next.
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I had the delight to meet fifteen-year-old fantasy author, Bron Bahlmann,
at a writers' conference last spring. He's a tall, unassuming young man
who handles his success with little fanfare. I posted a review of Bron's
first novel, the eerie Bone Warriors, a few days ago. Now read
about this talented, exceptional young author who is inspiring his peers
to make their own dreams come true. You'll be as amazed as I was.
Bron, your age makes you one of the most
remarkable authors I’ve
interviewed. Tell us a little about yourself and how you made the
decision to write a book.
Well I
come from a family of six boys. My next oldest brother, Zack, and I
entertained ourselves outside playing games and building things that
were very advanced for our age. We even set up a quarry near our
property in the mountains where we mined a shiny quartz out of walls and
off cliffs. Being around five years old at the time, (he was eight) this
was something unique to me and my brother.
So at an early
age I developed an imagination and very good thinking skills. It was
this outdoorsy lifestyle that gave me an edge over other kids my age and
I quickly excelled in school. Because other kids seemed so childish to
me for the most part, I turned to my own brain to entertain myself
during recess rather than playing a lot with others. I don’t mind that
I had few friends because the ones I do have are so great and share a
higher level of thinking with me that is truly inspiring.
My decision to
write came in third grade when I wrote a six or seven page beginning to
a story and showed it to my friend, Chris. He was very excited to read
it and said it was really good and I should write an ending. He was a
real boost to me even though neither of us knew it at the time. He was
as smart or smarter than me which made me confident in sharing a lot of
things with him. (He even helped me and my brother mine in our quarry
sometimes.)
Even though I had
approval from him it wasn’t
quite my time in third grade and writing became a hobby I had off to the
side. After moving to a new city when I was in fourth grade, I was very
unsure and insecure for a while because the only friends I could relate
to on the same level weren’t
there anymore. To make up for my new lack of friends, I started writing
more and truly began trying to write full length books in fifth grade.
Middle school was
a very hard time for me because of several misunderstandings between my
educators and myself, so I started writing even more to try and regain
some of my sanity. I was younger at the time and still not fully
equipped with a working knowledge of life so I wrote to try and show all
my teachers that I didn’t
need them and that I could have a job I wanted without them taking my
time to try and teach me what I knew.
After my book was
finished I realized that I had actually had fun writing it so I dropped
the revenge idea and started writing for fun.
Your mother is Shirley Bahlmann,
also a very accomplished author. How has is it to have two authors in
the house?
Well,
honestly, I prefer to think that I am the source of my writing talent. I
don’t like to think I got it from anyone; it’s just who I am and who
I want to be. People don’t have to have authors in the family to write
well. But having an author as my mom has helped me a lot socially
because she took me to conferences at a young age and I gained
friendships with other authors. But again I don’t want kids out there
to be afraid to try writing because they don’t have author contacts,
they should write if they want to and not worry about others.
That's great advice, Bron. So what do your
friends think about having an author for a friend?
Well, the
few friends I have think it’s really neat that I have my book
published and I really appreciate their support in this career. They
have all helped me not only with surviving school, but proofreading my
books for me.
How has being published affected your school
experience? Has this placed any added pressure on you as a student?
Ah,
school. Well, my school life hasn’t
changed yet, I just got my book published at the very end of last school
year so I’ll have to see what it’s like this year and hope my
principle will let me miss a few days to go do talks at other schools.
Tell us about Bone Warriors. I understand the
idea was inspired by a dream. Can you tell us about that dream?
That dream
was one I had forever ago. I had it in third grade so I don’t remember
details, but the whole concept of it is in my book and makes up the
skeleton of the first half. The ending half I thought of later, around
fifth grade.
My fifth-grade writing involved letters to
Donny Osmond, so I'm amazed. Which, if any of your characters, most
reflects your own personality?
I
didn’t write any of my characters after myself on purpose, but
I’d have to say I’m more of a Derrik. I am big for my age and not
the most popular or best looking person. I don’t like getting mad, but
when I do get mad, I can make some really stupid decisions. But unlike
Derrik, I think more like Tweaks, trying new things and creating things
all the time.
Those are great observations. What is it about
fantasy that inspires you?
The
ability to create new things and reveal them to other people in a world
where you are the Lewis and the Clark in a strange world that you
created and one that you know all about. But also it’s great to hear
that people like your book and enjoy the things you made, the things
that you think and believe in so much. Knowing that they gained from
what you love to do is what inspires me the most.
Are any of the characters in Bone Warriors
particular favorites? Why?
Well, I
like them all so much, but I’d have to say that Rigor and Mortis
are definitely two of my favorites because of their eccentric
personalities and outspoken minds. I kind of wish I could be like them.
I chuckled at them. Very clever. . . So, if you
could travel through time, in which era would you like to spend some
time and who would you enjoy meeting?
Wow, if I
could travel through time I would go EVERYWHERE! Well, I would go every
time I should say. But mostly I think I would want to see the future.
Not what happens to me or anyone I know but so I could learn more and
broaden my mind a little more.
Tell me about your writing habits. How many
hours a day do you write and do you set a daily goal?
I write
however much I feel like writing that day but I have an average of one
and a half to two thousand words a day.
What accolade or event would mean true success
to you?
That’s a
good question I haven’t had before. I think that being an influence in
others lives to the point that they share my ideas and can understand
the way I really think would be great. Having others who learn from me
and succeed because of my influence or ideas would be amazing. And
having those who learn from me raise above me and overcome me completely
would be completely awe-inspiring.
Those are noble goals, Bron. I bet that
attitude powers your philosophy of writing, which is. . .
Do it for
fun not for money. It’s great if you can make a living at writing but
don’t try to make a living off it. Do it because you love it.
What do you do for relaxation?
Play
puzzle games and listen to weird but inspiring music.
Name a few of your favorite books and or
movies, and why they touched you.
"Jumanji”
starring Robin Williams is always going to be one of my favorite movies
because of the unique and exciting idea of a world that can be brought
to life by the roll of dice, and because I have always been a huge fan
of Robin Williams and his movies. I also enjoy Tom Hanks’ movies
because of his unique ability to capture human emotion, “Sleepless in
Seattle,” “You've Got Mail,” “Castaway,” and “Joe and the
Volcano” are several examples.
As for
books, I don’t know that I have any favorites.
What is your favorite quote or saying?
Wow, these
are some great questions, I don’t know that I have one particular
favorite but I know some that I really like.
"I didn’t
have time to write a short letter so I wrote a long one instead."
-Mark Twain.
"Don’t judge a book by its cover."-Unknown
"Speak softly and carry a big stick."-Unknown- possible West
African proverb
"Time flies like an arrow, fruit flies like a banana."-Groucho
Marx
"(Honk Honk, whistle.)"-Harpo
Marx
(Chico) “Hey I got a cousin that lives in Texas!”
(Man) “No, not Texas! Dollars! Taxes!”
(Chico) “Ya, that’s where he lives! Dallas, Texas!"-Chico Marx
(Let me put it this way, Bron . . . if we ever
sit down to watch TV together, I'm holding the remote . . . ) hahahaha.
. . Can you share an anecdote from a book signing or speaking
engagement?
I was on
the author panel at a teen writing conference. Afterward, Mom saw me
signing books and having my picture taken with some girls who went to
the conference. Later she asked how many girls had their pictures taken
with me. I started counting, then gave up and said, “More than I have
fingers for!”
I think this is just the beginning of the
fanfare, Bron. Did you hear I was carrying your book in an elevator on
vacation and a mom told me her daughters were among those who had their
photo taken with you at that conference? Small world, huh? I'll buy you
some dark glasses and a fake moustache to keep
you safe. So, despite needing a disguise to ward off fan-attacks, what
advice would you give to other aspiring authors?
Write and
keep writing and don’t let others put you down because they are
jealous of you or don’t understand you.
What new projects do you have in the works?
A sequel
and two other books that are part of their own series.
What daring dream still remains unfulfilled?
Completely
overcoming my shyness.
Don't change too much, Bron. You're pretty
amazing just as you are!
Readers can watch a You Tube video about Bron at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-i7mihGy4fI,
or follow Bron's career on his web site at http://www.bronbahlmann.com/,
on his blog, http://bonewarriors.blogspot.com/.
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LAKE COUNTY LIBRARY FAVORITES-STAFF PICK!
Bone Warriors by
Bron Bahlmann
Young Adult
Call#: YF Bahlmann
The author is only 14,
yet he has a surprisingly adult use of vocabulary. I would say he has the
same ability as Christopher Paolini! This book is a YA fantasy set in a
world where a Necromancer has found a way to reanimate bones and use them
as warriors. Bron and his friend Tweaks, and a few other helpers along the
way are on a quest to save their parents. They come across some very
interesting trials as they make their way. Well told and worth a read!
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4.0
out of 5 stars Bone
Warriors, May 26, 2009
This is a story of two 15-year-old boys (written by a very creative
15 year old boy) who had to suddenly step into a world unknown to
them in order to save their families from an evil Necromancer who,
while in search of human souls has swept the countryside, leaving
their village burned to the ground while enslaving their families.
It is in being introduced to the different creatures they
encountered as they searched for the Necromancer's city of bones,
that the reader is introduced to the amazing imagination of the
author as he takes you on a journey filled with fear, danger,
intrigue, a touch of humor and keeps you caught up in the adventure
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5.0
out of 5 stars Great
fantasy adventure for tweens and teens., August 7,
2009
This book is a fun, fantasy adventure for both tweens and teens.
Being a teenager himself, Bron Bahlmann creates a story that
captures the imagination with just the right mix of magic, strange
creatures, adventure, and of course, courage. Makes a great
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5.0
out of 5 stars a
great adventure!, September 21, 2009
This book is a great adventure. You can't guess what will happen
next as two teenage boys encounter strange new creatures on
their quest to save their families. The book is very imaginative
and a unique addition to any library. Bone
Warriors |
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